freedom for Kashmir
Crash! Bang! Pow pow! For 72 years India and Pakistan have been battling for Kashmir. But, Kashmir itself is fighting for its independence! Although Pakistan and India have been trying to get Kashmir, the kashmiris are working hard to gain their rightful independence, from the war torn countries that are trying to take away Kashmir and the Kashmirian peoples rights!
Fighting since 1989, Kashmir people want independence and have been fighting against the other countries, that just want more land and more water. Almost 1,700 kashmiris have died from this war alone which is a lot for just wanting to be independent. Also it is there right to want independence and they have fought for it hard and for that alone they deserve independence from the greedy countries of India and Pakistan.
91% of people living in kashmir want their rightful independence and I feel that they should just vote and become independent and avoid fighting even more, do what the people want and give them the independence they deserve. It is there right as a state to try to get their independence from the bigger countries. Also it would stop the war and the fighting and losing a lot of money on war.
The kashmiris have been fighting so hard for something they originally deserved. Almost all of them already want it so why not give it to them instead of making them fight for it. The kashmiris want and deserve freedom from war, losing money, and the bigger countries that want to steal it.
I like the sound effects in the Introduction! I like all the facts put into this. There is soany facts it is hard to see what your opinion is. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I love how you added some action words at the beginning of your blog, really spices the blog up!
ReplyDeleteGood job! I really like your onomatopoeia.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you started the blog with "Cash! Bang! Pow pow!"
ReplyDeleteGood blog, I never knew that many Kashmiris want independence!
ReplyDeleteI like your first sentence and how you said crash! bang! Pow!
ReplyDeleteNice job, you do have some typos though. For example, make sure you capitalize Kashmir.
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